Attempt at Book 2

May 7, 2017 — Leave a comment

So I went into Kindle and downloaded this awesome masterpiece. Anyway. I noticed some spelling mistakes. Then one or two grammatical errors. At least. But then I realized at times I was forgetting I used a pen name. Methinks I’m going to have to edit this thing. 

Sample of dialogue from my book. 

Hi, Greg

Hi.

So when are you thinking of leaving?

Soon. 

Aw Graham. You could stay longer surely 

Maybe. 

It’s up to you Greg. 
Etc lol

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